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As the golden sun slowly descended from heaven’s throne, the blissful air silently coveted the restless men. A buffalo of immense stature would easily satisfy the hunger of the awaiting men. Before the beast even realized the impact, the men had launched a cleverly crafted tool into the animal’s beating heart, leaving it to a merciful death. Yet as the men feasted on their golden prize that night, little did they know that the same stone knife that had slain the beast would cripple humanity as it carved history’s long awaited path of technological advancement. Evolution has caused man to evolve their process of thinking, leading them to many advances in technology. These include our modern day phone, computer, and cars. However, as technology aids the evolving man, it can also harm humans and their environment.